Film Treatment feedback & analysis.

Film Treatment Feedback.

 

 

 

My Partner and I have been around to our friends and they have read our film treatment and have given us some useful feedback about what their initial thoughts are to our work.

 

We have got feedback from one of the actors, Heaven Yohannes(aged 16).



This is what she said:

I think this film opening seems really exciting and the way that youve described it has really made me want to watch it, im so happy i have a part to play in it because i feel like its going to be so much fun to make and then be able to watch it, your ideas are really cool and sound really professional, i think both of you could make this into a really exciting piece of work and i know im excited to see the end piece!

We then asked another one of our friends Yulieth Ortiz (aged 21).
This is what she said:

I am really looking forward to seeing what this piece of work is going to look like, it seems really interesting and the fact that you didnt tell us exactly what is going to happen in your treatment is such a good idea because now i just want to know what it is that happens. Im really looking forward to seeing it.

Analysis

 

Overall I think this feedback was a really good thing to gt because it made me feel like the project im working on is actually interesting to some people, althought everyone may not like the genre they are stil excited to see what the final outcome is going to be and this really makes me feel excited and motivated to work on it more and more. I Think that the feedback could have been moe useful if they perhaps had told me what they dont like but my teacher usually gives us constructive critisism so thats where we know where to change things and where we are going wrong. Also i noticed that although both of the girls who gave me feedback have a difference in age they both seem to be excited about the film opening so this shows that it has got quite a wide audience base that would like to see it.