Infected Rough cut.

 This is our first rough cut of our film opening, we have to make the editing a bit sharper and make sure that we cut the timing down as much as possible so it fits into our time space allowed. Overall i really like the way this is coming together and it is exactly what we had in mind from the beginning of our project. This piece really captures the thriller genre and is what we were set to do. Obviously there could be things which we could have done better and we could have improved and this is what we are aiming to do in the editing process of this one.

FINAL shooting script

This is our final shooting script, we have made sure everything is correct and that it is all exactly what it looks like in the actual film. we have put all the titles in red so it is easy to tell them apart.

Shooting Script Second draft

1.INT. PANNING SHOT OF THE SCIENCE LABS.

CUT TO

MID SHOT of DOCTOR 1 preparing a syringe. In the shot there are test tube racks, syringes and other bio-chemistry equipment spread across the desk.

DIFFERENT ANGLE switches to VOLUNTEER, nervously sitting down with his sleeve rolled up waiting for injection.

REVERSE SHOT. DOCTOR 1 turns towards the patient with syringe in hand.

DOCTOR ROGERS

We’re going to give you the injection now etc

DOCTOR 1 gives the patient an injection.

DIFFERENT ANGLE DOCTOR 2 is facing the VOLUNTEER

DOCTOR 2
Okay, that’s all now. You’re free to go.

2.LONG SHOT. The VOLUNTEER is at the door putting his coat on. DOCTOR ROGERS and DOCTOR 2 are a few metres away from him.
CLOSE-UP on DOCTOR ROGERS.

DOCTOR ROGERS

Remember to come back in two weeks!

VOLUNTEER

Ah, yeah, I will. See you.

VOLUNTEER leaves.

3.TWO-SHOT of DOCTOR 1 and DOCTOR 2

DOCTOR ROGERS

We better get leaving soon too.

DOCTOR 2

Yeah, you know what trains are like.

4.LONG SHOT FROM ONE SIDE OF THE ROOM WITH THE DOOR IN THE SHOT. DOCTOR ROGERS AND DOCTOR 2 LEAVE THROUGH SAID DOOR. CAMERA PANS DOWN TO THE DESK BELOW AND THE PETRI DISH WITH THE CHEMICAL USED IN THE PATIENTS ARM.

INJECTION STARTS TO FIZZ.

CUT TO

5.INT. NEXT DAY, SCIENCE LAB

LONG SHOT OF LAB. WINDOW TO THE LEFT OF THE ROOM PROVIDES LIGHT TO SUGGEST IT IS MORNING.

MID-SHOT OF DOCTOR ROGERS AND DOCTOR 2 putting on their lab coats and gloves etc.

DOCTOR 2 SEES THE CHANGES THAT HAVE TAKEN PLACE IN THE TEST TUBE OVER NIGHT. HE LOOKS VERY SHOCKED.

DOCTOR 2

Come and take a look at this DOCTOR ROGERS!

DOCTOR ROGERS rushes over to the desk

DOCTOR ROGERS

What is it? What-

He sees the test tubes.

DOCTOR ROGERS

Good Lord, how did this happen?

TWO SHOT OF DOCTOR ROGERS AND DOCTOR 2 LOOKING AT EACH OTHER IN DISPAIR.

6. EXT. WOOD GREEN STATION, HIGH ROAD BUS STOP.
VOLUNTEER is standing at the bus stop and starts scratchig at his hand, he looks at his hand and there is a faint red mark on it. He disregards the mark and then gets on the bus.

7. EXT. TURNPIKE LANE BUS GARAGE.
VOLUNTEER gets off the bus and looks very uncomfortable, he is vigorously scratching at his hand. He is walking home hastily.

8. PANING SHOT OF VOLUNTEER LIMPING DOWN THE STREET.

9.EXT. OUTSIDE 41 Milton Road, Tottenham, London, N15 3DS
VOLUNTEER shows signs of illness, he is bending over as if he has stomach ache.

CAMERA Close-ups on PASSER-BY

PASSER-BY

Are you okay? Do you need hand?

VOLUNTEER

No, I’m fine. Go away.

VOLUNTEER CONTINUES TO WALK TOWARDS HIS HOUSE.

10.INT. 41 Milton Road, Tottenham, London, N15 3DS

11.MID-SHOT of VOLUNTEER coming through the door.
POV shot of him looking down at his hand and seeing it al red and bumpy and weird looking.


12. INT. BEDROOM OF 41 MILTON ROAD
VOLUNTEER looks at himself in the mirror and sees his face full of bruises and what seems to look like a rash, he looks worried. He then doubles up on the ground and starts coughing up blood.


13. INT. BEDROOM OF 41 MILTON ROAD.
VOLUNTEER is on the floor of his room and he is laying on the floor with his eyes close for approx. 5 secs 
 CLOSE UP of his eyes opening suddenly and his eyes are red.

Shooting Script First Draft

1. INT. PANNING SHOT OF THE SCIENCE LABS.

CUT TO

MID SHOT of DOCTOR 1 preparing a syringe. In the shot there are test tube racks, syringes and other bio-chemistry equipment spread across the desk.

DIFFERENT ANGLE switches to VOLUNTEER, nervously sitting down with his sleeve rolled up waiting for injection.

REVERSE SHOT. DOCTOR 1 turns towards the patient with syringe in hand.

DOCTOR ROGERS

We’re going to give you the injection now etc

DOCTOR 1 gives the patient an injection.

DIFFERENT ANGLE DOCTOR 2 is facing the VOLUNTEER

DOCTOR 2
Okay, that’s all now. You’re free to go.

2. LONG SHOT. The VOLUNTEER is at the door putting his coat on. DOCTOR ROGERS and DOCTOR 2 are a few metres away from him.
CLOSE-UP on DOCTOR ROGERS.

DOCTOR ROGERS

Remember to come back in two weeks!

VOLUNTEER

Ah, yeah, I will. See you.

VOLUNTEER leaves.

3. TWO-SHOT of DOCTOR 1 and DOCTOR 2

DOCTOR ROGERS

We better get leaving soon too.

DOCTOR 2

Yeah, you know what trains are like.

4. LONG SHOT FROM ONE SIDE OF THE ROOM WITH THE DOOR IN THE SHOT. DOCTOR ROGERS AND DOCTOR 2 LEAVE THROUGH SAID DOOR. CAMERA PANS DOWN TO THE DESK BELOW AND THE PETRI DISH WITH THE CHEMICAL USED IN THE PATIENTS ARM.

INJECTION STARTS TO FIZZ.

CUT TO

5. INT. NEXT DAY, SCIENCE LAB

LONG SHOT OF LAB. WINDOW TO THE LEFT OF THE ROOM PROVIDES LIGHT TO SUGGEST IT IS MORNING.

MID-SHOT OF DOCTOR ROGERS AND DOCTOR 2 putting on their lab coats and gloves etc.

DOCTOR 2 SEES THE CHANGES THAT HAVE TAKEN PLACE IN THE TEST TUBE OVER NIGHT. SHE LOOKS VERY SHOCKED.

DOCTOR 2

Come and take a look at this DOCTOR ROGERS!

DOCTOR ROGERS rushes over to the desk

DOCTOR ROGERS

What is it? What-

She sees the test tubes.

DOCTOR ROGERS

Good Lord, how did this happen?

TWO SHOT OF DOCTOR ROGERS AND DOCTOR 2 LOOKING AT EACH OTHER IN DISPAIR.

6. EXT. OUTSIDE 41 Milton Road, Tottenham, London, N15 3DS
VOLUNTEER shows signs of illness, he is bending over as if he has stomach ache.

CAMERA Close-ups on PASSER-BY

PASSER-BY

Are you okay? Do you need a hand?

VOLUNTEER

No, I’m fine. Go away.

VOLUNTEER CONTINUES TO WALK TOWARDS HIS HOUSE.

7. INT. 41 Milton Road, Tottenham, London, N15 3DS

8. CLOSE-UP AND STUFF ON THE VOLUNTEER DIFFERENT SHOTS ALL EDITED TOGETHER REALLY QUICKLY TO SHOW THAT THE VOLUNTEER IS DISORIENTATED. HE’S ALSO DEVELOPING DARK CIRCLES UNDER HIS EYES AND OTHER SYMPTOMS ETC.

Shooting Script third draft

GRAPHIC ANIMATION OF PRODUCTION COMPANY NAME LASTING 3-5 SECONDS

1. INT. PANNING SHOT OF THE SCIENCE LABS.
 

TITLE: 'insert name here' presents *fades*

CUT TO

MID SHOT of DOCTOR 1 preparing a syringe. In the shot there are test tube racks, syringes and other bio-chemistry equipment spread across the desk.

TITLE: a CORTES-MCQUEEN production

CLOSE UP of science desk so the misc-en-scene is bio-chemical equipment such as test tubes and syringes etc.

TITLE: ESCAPED

DIFFERENT ANGLE switches to VOLUNTEER, nervously sitting down with her sleeve rolled up waiting for injection.

TITLE: STARRING - TARINN CALLENDER

REVERSE SHOT. DOCTOR 1 turns towards the patient with syringe in hand.

DOCTOR ROGERS

We’re going to give you the injection now etc

DOCTOR gives the patient an injection.

DOCTOR:
Okay, that’s all now. You’re free to go.

TITLE: HEAVEN YOHANNES

2. LONG SHOT. The VOLUNTEER is at the door putting her coat on. DOCTOR ROGERS is a few metres away from him.
CLOSE-UP on DOCTOR ROGERS.

DOCTOR ROGERS

Remember to come back in two weeks!

VOLUNTEER

Ah, yeah, I will. See you.

VOLUNTEER leaves.

3. MID SHOT of DOCTOR

DOCTOR ROGERS

checks the remaining medicine left and notices that the contents have been mixed up but dismisses it as thinking it was fine in the ctual syringe.

DOCTOR
CLOSE UP on DOCTOR ROGER packing everything away and getting ready to leave. 

TITLE: Casting by - Kerry Obihara

4. LONG SHOT FROM ONE SIDE OF THE ROOM WITH THE DOOR IN THE SHOT. DOCTOR ROGERS LEAVES THROUGH SAID DOOR. CAMERA PANS DOWN TO THE DESK BELOW AND THE PETRI DISH WITH THE MEDICINE USED IN THE PATIENT BUBBLING AND LOOKING VERY STRANGE. 

INJECTION STARTS TO FIZZ.

CUT TO

TITLE: Production designer - Kia Dacres-Lebrun

5. INT. NEXT DAY, SCIENCE LAB

LONG SHOT OF LAB. WINDOW TO THE LEFT OF THE ROOM PROVIDES LIGHT TO SUGGEST IT IS MORNING.

TITLE: Make Up Artist - Briony Dillon

MID-SHOT OF DOCTOR ROGERS putting on her lab coat and gloves etc.

TITLE: Costumes - Yulieth Ortiz

DOCTOR SEES THE CHANGES THAT HAVE TAKEN PLACE IN THE TEST TUBE OVER NIGHT. SHE LOOKS VERY SHOCKED.

TITLE: Editor - Chantelle Douglas

DOCTOR

CLOSE UP on DOCTOR ROGERS face. She looks very shocked and panics

DOCTOR ROGERS rushes over to the desk

TITLE: Supervising Editor - Tevin Campbell

DOCTOR ROGERS

CLOSE UP of phone calling volunteer

DOCTOR ROGERS

MID SHOT of her not getting the call through

MIDCTWO SHOT OF DOCTOR ROGERS LOOKING AT THE PHONE IN DISPAIR.

TITLE: ESCAPED (FILM TITLE)

6. EXT. WOOD GREEN STATION, HIGH ROAD BUS STOP.

VOLUNTEER is standing at the bus stop and starts scratching at her hand she looks at her hand and there is a faint red mark on it. She disregards the mark and gets on the bus.

7. EXT. TURNPIKE LANE BUS STATION.

VOLUNTEER gets off the bus and looks very uncomfortable, he is vigorously scratching at her hand. She is walking home hastily.

8. PANNING SHOT OF VOLUNTEER LIMPING DOWN THE STREET.
 

TITLE: Director of photography - Evangeline Smith

9. EXT. OUTSIDE 41 Milton Road, Tottenham, London, N15 3DS
VOLUNTEER shows signs of illness, she is bending over as if she has stomach ache.

CAMERA Close-ups on PASSER-BY

PASSER-BY

Are you okay? Do you need hand?

VOLUNTEER

No, I’m fine. Go away.

VOLUNTEER CONTINUES TO WALK TOWARDS HER HOUSE.

10. INT. PANNING LONG SHOT of interior of 41 Milton Road, Tottenham, London, N15 3DS

TITLE: PRODUCED BY - ARTHUR JOHN

11. MID SHOT of VOLUNTEER coming through the door.

POV shot of her looking down at her hand and seeing it all red and bumpy and weird looking.

TITLE - Written by Rahab McQueen and Sharon Ortiz-Cortes

12. INT. BEDROOM OF 41 MILTON ROAD.

VOLUNTEER looks in mirror and sees her face all rashed. She then doubles over on the ground and starts coughing up blood.

13. ZOOM of VOLUNTEER on the floor for approx. 5 (in this time the TITLE: DIRECTED BY JAMES HARGREAVES comes up) seconds then suddenly CLOSE-UP SHOT of her eyes opening and they are red (contacts).

Shooting Script draft

This is our shooting script draft. I have made it a lot better and clearer for the audience to read.
this will give them a feel of what our film is about and make it clearer for us about what we should film at what time.