1st raw cut draft of our film

This is our first shoot. My partner and I feel that this is not as strong as it could be. As it is our opening scene we need to captivate our audience right from the start of the film and we feel that this opening does not do that. To improve our opening scene I think we need to use a wider range of camera shots and have better lighting. Also we are going to make the scene more interesting by tweaking the scene a little bit so it seems a lot more exciting